This is a good sentence in your writing paragraph @michelle.gent

Ash’s eyes grew wide, not only at the prospect of fifty quid a week, but at the additional work she’d just volunteered for. What was it they said in the army? Never volunteer for anything…

“Well kid? You were all enthusiastic about it just now. Are you gonna do my housework or do I have to find someone to do it?”

“No, I mean, yes! I’ll do it. I won’t be able to fit it all in at dinner time though, but I’ll be able to do it all.”