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RE: Echoes of Tommorrow's Past - Part 15 (My Original Novella)

in #story7 years ago

Yes @ezzy! The supermarket payoff! Amazing! I was picturing how you might pull it off and let me tell you, I'm not disappointed. Great characterization from James's point of view. I really feel for him as living in constant fear from daya to day must be hell. The way you describe everything and set the scene is so on point. This was a horrifying chapter. Those images he's having are deadly! Where in the hell does it go from here?

Absolutely brilliant, @ezzy. Masterclass yet again.

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Hey @myb!

I like that, the "supermarket payoff", lol! But yeah, we're closing in to the end and I hope you like the wrap up. You're right, James is in a hurt of confusion and hurt right now. Even though he was temporarily cured for a while there, everything around him started to fall apart.

Stay tuned for the next part real soon and thanks so much for all your incredible support once again! :)