It is a flowing story. I admire how well you narrate it, although i get the feeling after reading it, that it is somewhat incomplete...and lack that climax i was expecting. Is there a continuation? I also feel like it does not follow from the story title.

Otherwise you write well.

Meanwhile, i curate for the @asapers, a group that manually scouts and supports newbies like you and me. I recommend you follow the @asapers account to join this community an grow.