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RE: Ups and downs (An Original Very Short Story)

in #story8 years ago

Thank you. This is so sweet of you.
I imagined Franky being a very simple basic guy, who doesn't really know how to behave at the dinner table. That is to know which side of the plate to put two knives and two forks, which glass is for wine and which is for water, how long one supposed to wait after the prayer before putting your spoon in a soup, etc. So when they both sat at the dinner table with Franky’s parents, the parents were impressed seeing that Franky finally did it right and figured whose influence this was. And yes she didn’t jump on the table and did other similar damage.
Thank you again