Man... this was pretty intense. I tend to read between the lines of everything and I think you are on to something huge here.
This has the underpinnings to be a great piece of social criticism, I sincerely hope you continue.
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Thank you @meno I'm glad you got the slight social criticism in this piece. I got into screenwriting a year ago and thinking about turning this into a web series. Pretty excited to continue with it.