Nice story! I enjoyed that. You have a nice way of using descriptive words while it still sounds natural. I struggle with that, I feel like, when I read over my own writing.
Good writing :) Looking forward to seeing more
Nice story! I enjoyed that. You have a nice way of using descriptive words while it still sounds natural. I struggle with that, I feel like, when I read over my own writing.
Good writing :) Looking forward to seeing more
The key, in my case, lies in the metrics; the poetic sound that words make when pronounced and the poetic air that ideas create when they tumble from your language perception and into your subconscious, where the imagery is created. It's like a conversational trance that needs to sound natural to work, and the rest is just the music that comes with it, filled with concrete idas to give a sensation of fullness.
This is all together with a subconscious algorithm obtained from practice to create texts that, if understood perfectly (through sounding natural) will progressively call the reader forward to keep reading the rest. And I wrote my first paragraph with this. Hope you noticed it. The parentheses kinda broke the momentum. I practice a lot.