You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:
Her heart was beating fast and, as if her body had a life of it's own, she decided to take a step forward.It should be its own instead of it's own.
You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:
Her heart was beating fast and, as if her body had a life of it's own, she decided to take a step forward.It should be its own instead of it's own.
Thanks! I totally missed that!