🌳 The Land of Nordania πŸŒ‘ ~ PART 6 ~ [Original Story/Poem]

in #story β€’ 7 years ago (edited)


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when suddenly.

Big round orbs start to appear
Watching me, staring at me
Though they have no eyes
I can feel them, hear them
They are the lost souls
Sreaming in my head

Slowly the fog starts fading off
A black darkness reveals itself
When the big bright light
Starts to move
Heading into my direction
It is Queen L'odair!

"Quiet!"
Prompt, the echoes in my mind are gone
Total silence.
She is right in front of me.
She.. She is... So Beautiful!
Nothing but pure light, in all its colours
Enchanting me

When for a moment, I look down
Realizing my feet have left the ground.
I am floating..

Rapidly I turn my head
-Nothing but an empty void
The entrance I came through
It is Gone..

I look back up, in front of me
Staring at the light, at Queen L'odair
And she starts to speak;

"Idling, why hast thou forsaken me?"


By Droucil


~ Part 1 ~
~ Part 2 ~
~ Part 3 ~
~ Part 4 ~
~ Part 5 ~

~ Part 7 (finale) ~
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7 parts is great!

I use 7 words in my seed poems.

:)

Thank you for all your kind words and upvotes :)! Really appreciate it

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Jup :)

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