Story time 😜 !

in #story β€’ 6 years ago

Heya mates ,

So i was thinking , why dont i write a story ?? What mor can happen heh πŸ˜‚ lets give it a try ,shall we !!


She breathed heavily as she ran away from him , she didnt know where to run .... her mind was so shaken. Suddenly she felt herself falling to the ground.

Louri was a beautiful young girl of 17 . She was abit overweight, which caused her to be the laughing stock of her high school. She never got a date for the prom, she was never asked for any dances. She had a lonley life. Thats when suddenly one day she met joe , he changed her whole life. She started believeing again. She started having hope again. She was so happy. She only had her mom , and coming from that kind of a family. She never actually felt completely safe. But with him , everything was magic. She was never ever scared.

So days turned to weeks , then weeks turned to months. Their relationship was flourishing so much. And he actually helped her to get back her self confidence, which made her even start exercising. So one day, joe said to louri , Gal you know how much i love you , now its your turn to show me... will you come to my villa today?? My dad and mum have gone for a vactaion so its empty... we can have fun there. I will show you around...and even cook some delicious meal for you...so what do ypu say..??

She couldnt refuse this now , could she ?? She was madly in love with this lad. But she knew her mum would never allow her to go. So she made up a fake story about the high school reunion and she left. Her poor mum had no idea what so ever.

So as she reached there, she saw it wasnt just them, there was alot of his friends, and weed and much more. Now this went from a safe day at home to something so wild. Louri , was a nice girl , she never even drank beer yet. So these people forced her to smoke weed, poor her , she didnt even know that was weed. She was so out of control.

Many guys tried to pursue her , she felt so weird...she couldnt do anything, she was loosing control over her body... it was too much for her.

It was morning..

Suddenly she opened her eyes and she saw people were all staring at her, she was half naked, she had no idea what had happened. She stood up, dragged herself to the bathroom and saw her face, people had written looser on her forehead , her lips were bleeding ....was she raped?? Were they all having fun with her ??

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She felt so helpless, she cried and cried,...she couldnt come out of the bathroom... she couldnt fave all of them. So she stayed there, without eating anything, it was dark ,she could see through the window. Nobody cared enough to seewhere she was... not even joe...oh where was joe all this time , she wondered.

At last , she gathered up all her courage and came out of the bathroom, and she saw that whole place was trashed. But , there wasnt anyone there,...so she went to his bedroom to take her purse. And she saw , something she shouldnt have seen . Joe was on top of angela , one of her bullies from school. She was so surprised or should i say betrayed , that words werent coming from her mouth, instead tears came. She sniffed abit, hearing her they looked out and saw her. Laughing at her angela , said, Hahah looser, what did you think ?? Did you think he really loved you ?? It was all part of my plan...haha...oh you came for your purse ryt... Saying that she threw her purse at her face,...

She lost it, she ran and ran...she reached somewhere...she didnt even know this place... her dress was torn,..she was looking really not okay...she couldnt call her mum,... she had lied to her. So she walked, suddenly she felt someone following her,... she turned and saw the shadow of a man,...she ran for her life.


To be continued.......

Please do tell me what you thought about my first story..

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