Every New part of your series gets better than the former. Great job!
The horse concept was very intriguing. You drew me to the mind of that horse. That was good.
But come on, the humour in the last paragraph, when you said the horse set out for sugar cubes instead of the masters safety, was hilarious.
Hey, I'm glad to hear you were able to get into the mind of the horse. It took a lot of rewrites to get to where he came through well.
I was hoping for that reaction with the last part! Thank you for appreciating that. :)
You are always welcome
Cheers!