Great initiative! Thank you for thinking it up and thanks to @miti for sharing it with the Italian community: you might end up with quite a few stories translated from Italian 😉
I liked your story, too, although Mary comes off as rather harsh. I wouldn’t expect her to “snap”.
@imcesca . Very good spot about Mary. I changed the word to "warned". You could be a good proof reader.
I hope you will particiipate!
LOL Editor is one of my dream jobs, actually (but I studied Law so I do other stuff) 😜
Here’s mine, doubling up as #caturday post.
https://steemit.com/story-300words/@imcesca/the-vigil-a-300-words-short-story