Hello @mhizkemmie, it is nice to see that you are improving in your posts. However, just like @adetola advised, i would suggest you get a mentor in the discord server. They will put you through how to make your posts quality.
You can notify me if you wish to be mentored 
I wish to, thanks.
Okay. Please head onto the server and state it in the general chat that you would like to be mentored. Someone will attend to you