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RE: ADSactly Contest - SteemShort #2 - Post 1: Request for First Part of the Story

in #steemshorts7 years ago

It was a Sunday evening on my way home from the mall, suddenly the clouds turned dark, and in a short while it started to rain heavily... I rushed to a corner waiting for it to stop, I was amazed at what I saw and it took me back to some memories of my childhood as the young girl was dancing in the rain...she danced beautifully to the rhythms that the rain drops made..... I had no choice but to jump in.......

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Your summary is too short (only 82 words). It should have at least 100 words, and no more than 200.