Reviewed your answers, but a contest will be prolonged for the next week, not because you are the only one submitting but because the answers are really different and something complex.
HERE ARE THE ANSWER FROM THE DISCORD CHANNEL, SO THAT EVERYBODY SEE the correct ones.
@awolesigideon thank you for taking time to participate, but a contest will be prolonged next week, also an answers were completely different. I don't want to 'invent' things, so I will give you an insight in the story and why I asked those question .
How many times the characters of Mother and Father change during the first 11 chapters of the story, and what are the points where that happens?
10 times, after an each shock , event, what ever they are doing.... their character are somebody else, not only by looks, in one chapter we have a mother having a different color of a hair, in others she is switching between a pregnant woman and a woman who is not...., so those are ALL different ppl
What details in a story, and where, did you noticed to be completely out of a place?
a sister, or a baby, or a pregnant woman.... they are constantly appearing and disappearing .
in one chapter you have a small baby, in another no baby, in another mother is switching between pregnant woman and a woman who is not. It is a very very notable change
What is happening in the story and what is your best guess what this story is maybe about?(edited)
this is more a thing of a reader, about you, how do you see all the event happening.
ok the contest will be continued, I will add the @awolesigideon review in a finalized post, to get exposure, same like my other readers. You are absolutely welcomed to re-submit based on new questions. I think when you have a whole story in one piece it is easier to see what is going on.
Reviewed your answers, but a contest will be prolonged for the next week, not because you are the only one submitting but because the answers are really different and something complex.
HERE ARE THE ANSWER FROM THE DISCORD CHANNEL, SO THAT EVERYBODY SEE the correct ones.
@awolesigideon thank you for taking time to participate, but a contest will be prolonged next week, also an answers were completely different. I don't want to 'invent' things, so I will give you an insight in the story and why I asked those question .
in one chapter you have a small baby, in another no baby, in another mother is switching between pregnant woman and a woman who is not. It is a very very notable change
ok the contest will be continued, I will add the @awolesigideon review in a finalized post, to get exposure, same like my other readers. You are absolutely welcomed to re-submit based on new questions. I think when you have a whole story in one piece it is easier to see what is going on.