Hello, @mayowadavid!
Thank you for this contribution. Your post is very informative and well-illustrated with relevant images and dividers. Keep up the good work.
In terms of content, I have mixed feelings about your contribution. The post certainly contains useful information about the project, but tells the readers so little about your personal knowledge, views and experience of using this tool. Your personal opinion is the unique feature you can add to your texts, and this is the kind of editorial content we particularly like to see in blog posts.
That said, the writing of this post was not good enough, I'm afraid. There were serious issues of grammar and style, making your post difficult to comprehend at times. Grammar errors affect the reader's perception of the author's credibility, and make it hard for the reader to get a grasp on the key points for the whole text. I would advise you to consider using grammar checker software in order to enhance the readability of your texts.
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I make use of grammar checker while writing the post, about the personal information i will work on it. Please can you highlight the part with serious grammar style issues. So that i can work on it on my next series @lordneroo
Hello!
I will cite a few examples for you:
This sentence should read: "then I will say it is much easier to introduce the person to the blockchain.
This would be a better sentence: "Because in this blog series I will be discussing WordPress, Steempress, and the reasons why you should make use of steempress as a WordPress blogger."
This sentence is hard to understand. I think you meant to write: "In order not to divert your attention, a website is an interconnected page used to display information about the products and services offered by an organisation."
I hope you will find this comment useful.
Ok thanks for your time, i now know what you meant by difficult to read.
Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!