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RE: Why You Should Install Steempress On Your Wordpress Blog

in #steempress6 years ago

Hello!

I will cite a few examples for you:

then I will say it is much more easier to introduce the person to blockchain.

This sentence should read: "then I will say it is much easier to introduce the person to the blockchain.

Because in this blog series I will be discussing about WordPress, Steempress, and reason why you should make use of steempress as a WordPress blogger.

This would be a better sentence: "Because in this blog series I will be discussing WordPress, Steempress, and the reasons why you should make use of steempress as a WordPress blogger."

In other not divert your attention, a website is an interconnected page use to display information about what an organisation product or services.

This sentence is hard to understand. I think you meant to write: "In order not to divert your attention, a website is an interconnected page used to display information about the products and services offered by an organisation."

I hope you will find this comment useful.

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Ok thanks for your time, i now know what you meant by difficult to read.