Off to a good start for sure. Could use a bit of polish and some more vivid description, but definitely something to go on. If you ever want any assistance with your writing feel free to hit me up.
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Off to a good start for sure. Could use a bit of polish and some more vivid description, but definitely something to go on. If you ever want any assistance with your writing feel free to hit me up.
Thanks for your input, and welcome to Steemit.