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You're on fire!

Maybe my next story should be on SuperMower? 😉

Lawn mower queen?

This is exciting and something to look forward to. I really enjoy reading this. Are you sure you are not a fiction writer? You are, aren't you? :D

Did the loss of innocence result in this resurgence of magic within her friend?

It would interesting to see what power Selenia has. Sometimes in the lowest times of our lives we friend strength. I wonder what revenge can do. It's a never ending cycle.

I have heard the song before and it does set the mood for the story.

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That would be awesome if I was a fiction writer, but I don't have the patience to write the details required for a good story. I like creating the story line, not getting into the descriptive aspect of the characters and details. Oh well.

I love to read, but the Selenia story for steemmonster is the first time I tried writing a story. I have no idea what power Selenia will yield. Let's see what my imagination brings forth. :)

You want me to kill for your inspiration? I could easily do that. Lots of tiny dragons we call mosquitoes here in our place that I would love to smash and kill lol!

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You’ll need to smash lots of those dragon mosquitoes to turn on the creativity! Lol. Mosquitos are ferocious creatures. Try not to get bitten!

This is very good, you should definitely take the time to join the gold team writing group. I really think you could help make the story of this game even better... Great job @beeyou :)

You always have encouraging words, Dave. :) You know I don't have the time needed to work in a writing group. It would be unfair to the other team members. Plus, the gold team is super secret. I'm just happy to write a story when I have some free time. It's more fun without the pressure of delivering quality work.

Best of luck to you and the white team!!

@beeyou you desever to be encouraged... you are good. You always give a disclaiimer that makes me think you don't realize it. Just let it flow, you are a natural :)

Appreciate the support Dave. 🙂

Oh man I love this side of you Beeyou!

Creating fiction is all about you shaping the words to your will. Of letting loose the imagination in your head and giving your readers a glimpse of it.

“Together, we will spread fear into our enemies’ hearts”, Adelaine vowed. Dragons' words spoken in truth, and only death would prevent a dragon in carrying out a promise.

I am looking forward to that,

I’m glad you’re enjoying my story, Mave. I look forward to finding out what the revenge will be myself. Hehe, the story is developing on its own. I have no say in it, I’m simply the writer! 😂

Once again, well done @beeyou :) I see Dave's comment trying to give you another job haha, but you outsmarted that offer pretty darn quickly :)

I'm looking forward to the next installation whenever it has the need to be written...and the time!

Thanks Lynn. Dave is always pushing us to do better but I know better than to fall for it! Hehe, I would love to join a team but I just don’t have the time to commit. It’s a shame because it sounds like a lot of fun.

I just let the storyline come out whenever it wants. Not too many things inspire me to write so will see! Btw, congrats on your pussy (cat) post being curie’d. Way to go!!

You'll probably continue to enjoy writing more if you don't join a writing team with commitments ;)

Thanks re: the curie as well. I don't mind saying I was very surprised by it. Pleasantly of course, but if left me thinking that what I thought I knew about "curie quality" would need rethinking haha

I just came across a post on phallic shaped sea creatures that also got curie’d. Another very interesting topic!

hahaha @beeyou, why have we wasted so much time on things so serious? 😎

You should write more COM posts. I think you are a comedic writer yourself. ;)

Guess what I am trying? Yep, you fast reply. I'm just too behind with my comments, and both you and Dave love it. So here I am. :)

Don't you find that you are just ripping through the comments using it?? When I'm behind, it's my go-to, otherwise, I go old-school :)

I saw someone's 7daypositivitychallenge post titled "self love" and I've been marinating that one in my brain for a bit :) We'll see!

Nice story and put together well. The words/story seem to flow when one is enjoying /having fun writing it.

Hey, I see you came out of the dog house. ;)

The words/story seem to flow when one is enjoying /having fun writing it.

So true! Some days, I can't think of one word to say. Other days, they just flow. I'll continue to write if another song inspires something. So far, it is music that inspires me to write for this Selenia story.

yes they have not built a dog house yet that can hold me :)

Well..... when I read for you - I had no idea that you had already told the story of Adelaine too!!!!!! :)

I just finished the audio for you and when I went to look for the story I found this and the story of the General!!!!!! I'm so excited to read it @beeyou!!!!! :)

this was GREAT!!! did i miss more?? is there more of Adelaine???

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Hey @dreemsteem. I just saw this as I was getting the post ready for my index. I am so behind and life is so busy, so don't mind me. I appreciate you stopping by! Thanks for the tipu, awww, you didn't have to do that. :)

<3 hehehee no worries - and if you find this later - don't reply hehehehehe just know i'm thinking of you! LOL

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