This is so so goood! You have a way of getting someone immersed in your story and asking for more after each line, its such a nice one with a beautiful feeling. Though Duno was on a path for revenge, he found his purpose at the end... A better one!! Love for people who once hated him and the desire to protect them. Thank goodness Lyanna is back and as a guardian this time... Together with the elf, the all are gonna do amazing things...