you've made me cry, not for criticizing the readings I've read lately but they're colder, you've given it the Latin heat. i love the lines of intensity that impregnate the story, the revenge in Duno's mind and the appearance of the elf is for me the best part.
by the way I miss you :( we are going to see we are going to see we are going to see (8) :D
thank you for sharing your creation, very ingenious.
Greetings dear friend