SSP 100 Days Challenge (Day 90): ANTS

in #steemitschoolpoetry7 years ago (edited)

This is my ninetieth entry for the Steemit School of Poetry 100 Days Challenge.

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ANTS

Too many things are
strings or pearls
snatched by titans

Too many things are
a whirlpool of chances
in a hurricane

Too many things explode
in a cacophony of impossibilities

Too many things lack something
to get hold to

Too many things are
too many layers deep

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Too many things stray away
from the planned path

Too many things are like
mustangs in stampede

Too many things are
a herd of cats

Too many things are
out of reach

out of our control

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for we are but
ants on a tennis court

prone to being squashed
at any time

oblivious to the
rules of the sport

let alone how the
tournament works

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NOTES

This poem talks about how we humans are insignificant in the great scheme of the universe, life is too complex for we even to grasp or even see a few movements in advance. The ilussion of free-will is but delussion of grandeur and lack of humility.

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Original text from Sansón Carrasco

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:) That somehow reminds me "What If The Sun Were A Ping Pong Ball?"
https://steemit.com/steemstem/@procrastilearner/what-if-the-sun-were-a-ping-pong-ball by @procrastilearner and I also think @beograd @lemouth @irelandscape would find sth in it, too. ∜mp
(Usa @originalworks para indicar que el texto es suyo.)

De acuerdo contigo, @sansoncarrasco. Como hormigas somos. En una oportunidad te lo dije: la brillantez del poeta está en la mirada, siempre en la mirada detallada. Como es que pasa el tiempo y ya te faltan 10! :)

Y renaceré de mis cenizas como el Gato Félix. Un abrazo Nancy, Nancy, Nancy.

demasiadas cosas reales solo formaran partes de una simple ilusión...