Hi everyone, I hope you are doing great. It's again about the 100 DAY POETRY CHALLENGE (hosted by @d-pend). It's Day 90 today and below is my entry.
A BRIEF ABOUT MY ENTRY
Today, my entry titled "Oh Mademoiselle" is a free verse poem eulogizing a simple and adoring princess. I hope you enjoy it.
Twinkle Twinkle Little Star
How I wonder what you are
Mezmerizing and encapsulating
Making every moment bright like the day
Oh little mermaid
Flipping every inch of her with style
With gaits so perfect like the Queeen's
How blessed I am to have you
Oh little princess of the castle
Let me serve at your command
Running to every call you make
Like the king's right-hand maid
Oh Lady of honor
May I wrap my arms
Around your gracious body
Feeling every inch of your sweetness
Oh Miss independent
May I come into your perfect presence
Caring for each of your worries
Grant me the grace, oh mademoiselle
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Lovely poem... Great use of rhyme, timing and metaphors. Enjoyed the read. A periodic twinkle of greatness. Like what you did at the beginning. Brilliant.
Your last but one stanza seemed incomplete and short though. Big ups...
Finish hard!!
Thanks mate..I appreciate your feedback..I'll try to improve next time