Be The Change-100 Days of Poetry Challenge: Day Twelve

in #steemitschoolofpoetry • 7 years ago (edited)

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Be The Change

I move,
Moving forward brings change,
I am adaptable
not allowing myself to stay the same.
With each new day
A different feeling,
Embrace each emotion,
Bringing with it
new healing.
Unique behaviours
rediscovered truths
a new direction
leading to different routes.
Simple,
Open wisdom,
Shared amongst the many
Connecting it with all that recognize such vitality.
No segregation,
No room for distrust
Moving forward in order to readjust.
I move,
Changing always like the seasons,
To flow like water
And bring down centuries of conditioning.



Notes


This poem is self explanatory, for me I like to write simply so that the message can be understood.
I consider myself to be intermediate poet.

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Thank you @d-pend for creating this challenge and allowing me to take the time daily to be creative and expressive. . It is something that I have never had any input with , it comes straight from my heart, on to paper and more recently here on to steemit

Check out this great challenge here: https://steemit.com/steemitschool/@d-pend/announcing-the-steemit-school-poetry-100-day-challenge
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     7 years ago  

    Liking the rhyming. Sometimes the rhymes are unexpected and i like that. Keep reading allowed to yourself to check the scan. What you write is simple and clear, but with deep subject matter. Very strong.

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       7 years ago  

      thanks @shivvi for your feedback, it's very welcome x

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         7 years ago  

        All the best in the challenge, I know how tough it can be. SteemOn!

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           7 years ago  

          This is lovely Aishlinn. I am happy you let your thoughts flow openly so they came out as you thought them. At least to me, it looked like that. I am ever changing to these days because I feel like I said before in a post and as you mentioned here, being like water is what works for us because then we stop holding on to things and just keep flowing.

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             7 years ago  

            thank you Sharoon, yes indeed it is so important to let things flow, because holding on , leads to so many problems for us in so many different ways.x

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               7 years ago  

              wow i like the choice of words.The right thing to do in life is moving forward and adapting to change.

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                 7 years ago  

                Thank so much @sofiesvoice, really happy you came to check out my words x

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                   7 years ago  

                  you are welcome.can you please check out my new poem on Nelson Mandella,one of our african most admired leader dear friend?thanks

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