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If that weirdly cool start of your story is any indication, I bet you have loads of crazy ideas! Just a suggestion though if I may, maybe you could add a border for each panel? Adding simple background colors could also help enhance it as well. Good luck man! I'll keep coming for more of this! :D

Haha, thanks for the suggestions. You're absolutely right - those are some things I've been avoiding, but they really would make it more polished. Time to step my game up!

Goodluck bro! I bet the next one is gonna be more awesome!
Can't wait!