For a hedge fund, you're really underplaying the information that they really want, which is "Various ROI options for investors" and "ROI through passive income options." Those two need to be fleshed out substantially, and a lot of the rest of it really isn't important.

Even so, I suspect that any of the current options for passive ROI here are less passive than a hedge fund would want. They don't seem like very good customers for PoS coins at all, or Steem in specific, given how much our system incentivizes activity even on the very basic level of delegating for return.