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RE: Steem Investor "Pitch Deck" Presentation (Feedback Requested)

in #steem6 years ago

I have a quick question. Will you be presenting the slides or will you send the presentation out to investors for them to read on their own?

If you are presenting the slides as a part of a face-to-face meeting, I agree with some of the other comments that the slides might contain too much text. This would also make the hyperlinks in slide #10 unnecessary.

If you are sending the entire presentation out electronically, then I can see how the added information may be beneficial. If so, then you may want to add links to for the dApps on slide #5.

Regardless of how you present the information, I recommend ...

  • standardizing your bullet points. Some have no space, some 1 space, and some too much space. And some bullets are not bullets but dashes.
  • rethinking the use of the plus sign on slide #2. I feel like the information could be read in a variety of ways.

I hope my thoughts help.