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RE: Will the REAL Olivia please stand up? - Steemjet Artist ICO almost complete!

in #steem6 years ago (edited)

The layout, fonts, colors, shading, picture, is all brilliant, but the slogan is hard to digest - "incisive" "programme""home" "cause" are all difficult, busy, confusing, distracting words to digest.

Try this:

Steem High - Learn how STEEM can fill your dreams

also, make sure you center (instead of right justify) the slogan

other than that, it is a brilliant concept

and one more thing, try to use shrazi's olivia

put her in the same location but mirror the image. Very impressive work !!! I think you are right, this WILL be a masterpiece!

You have been very impressive lately!

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Thanks @dimimp. I will do that as well and improve more.

Back to work on my computer and I delivered this masterpiece. I edited and made the right adjustments to it.
@dimimp

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