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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #17: 199 words, 10SBD prize pool!

in #stach7 years ago (edited)

MAJESTIC PARTY-submission for My Twisted Fantasy
I am being followed, I know it. Around the castle like hotel, with stunning buttresses all around the outside, though I have never been outside, I know this somehow. There is a continued repetition here, the more I try to leave the more inward the structure I am going. The more I go along the higher my class rises in this gaudy illusion, the more I resist it lowers, and the more I am followed by the mindless drones posing as characters in the play going on all around me. I am stuck in this hell and it keeps repeating.
Finally I get to the exit after a countless amount of time in fooling my followers, I find an exit. The exit is a normal glass revolving door. I walk through and am on the beautifully designed brick, pillar, entryway littered with works of art, statues, but then guard dogs suddenly are howling after me. I look ahead and suddenly see a convenience store light. I am leaving my childhood church building to get to this safe place across the street. Suddenly Armageddon. Devastation everywhere. I am stuck in a dream and can't escape.