The unapologetic theme of this poem is a bit refreshing although a little offputting. That being said, I think you did a great job of relaying the perspective of the narrator. Good write. Welcome to steemit.
The unapologetic theme of this poem is a bit refreshing although a little offputting. That being said, I think you did a great job of relaying the perspective of the narrator. Good write. Welcome to steemit.
Love that perspective I can see what you mean. I see the energy where it's been directed and I can see how it's off putting.
But it's good. Outside of the comfort zone is where the magic happens. I look forward to seeing more.