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RE: Sndbox Summer Camp Writing - Task 3

Thank you :) It would have been longer, but I was so afraid it would disqualify me. I wanted to expand so much on each character. I feel like I did not paint a complete picture. I will probably go and finish the picture, for me :)

Thank you for taking the time to read it, you have made my night :) I am so thrilled you like it :)

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yes so far really good and pulls you in deeper . the pictures adds to the story with intrigue . I'll finish it later

LOL, best comment ever. That is our house and yes it does add to the story, LOL.

I was going to make a comment about the open window and that was the cause, but let it go . kept with the theme of the story on comment . LOL

It does not look like that anymore, that was before we moved in lol Well except for the basement lol

Thats funny , I know it doesn't . You give us glimpse with all the photos you take and post . You have a nice Home

Yes, it is, but it still needs a lot of work. I have painting to do this summer due to Dregon coloring all his bedroom walls. I was really happy because I hated the color eroded picked ;) He believes I secretly told him to do it lol

LOL There is now way me wife will let me pick a color , well she will let me pick it then go with the color she wanted lol. We have a system. It doesn't matter if you bought a new house there will be something that needs to be done