Great story!
You established the atmosphere very well with your descriptions and the division into different 'chapters' afterwards gives it a good pace.
Really well done 😀
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Great story!
You established the atmosphere very well with your descriptions and the division into different 'chapters' afterwards gives it a good pace.
Really well done 😀
I'm glad I succeeded in that part! It was the biggest challenge for me as well, since I've never wrote anything longer than a page in deep POV. Dividing the story in different scenes was a good way to keep it flowing nicely. Next time I'll have to think more about the different scenes beforehand though, but that's already a really valuable lesson learnt :).