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RE: SML Music Producers Feedback Contest Round 1 - Submit Your Tracks!

in #smlchallenge • 7 years ago
  • Classic beginning.
  • Nice initial development.
  • Skillful use of ambient sounds.
  • Nice key melody at 0:52
  • Lovely transition starting at 1:46 as well the one at 2:12
  • Overall, the part after 2:12 lacks some kind of inspiration, but the solution starting at 3:33 is awesome - changing the rhythmic as one of my favorite techniques

Space for improvement:

  • The Buzz sound starting between 1:06 and 1:07 could be slightly change as it's now a bit irritating

Great work overall. Looking to cheer you up for your next tracks!

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     7 years ago  

    Thanks for those comments @joymatters! It's great to see such a detailed breakdown of the track. I can see what you mean about the part after 2:12...it's always a challenge to keep an instrumental inspiring throughout the whole track. The uptempo bit at the end is also one of my favorite parts of the track. In fact, it made me consider creating a completely uptempo version...haven't done that as yet though. Great to hear you dig the track overall :)

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