Hey @novili. Thanks for sharing the track! I wasn't sure what to expect with that title, but I'm impressed! It's a super chill track and it's got a great atmosphere throughout. I think the melodies work really well and I'm a fan of the kick drum and the overall trap-influenced drum patterns. I felt like the hi-hats in the background were being drowned out sometimes (like around 2:05), it wouldn't be too bad if they stood out a little more there. But maybe that's also my speakers talking..? Or actually, maybe that was a conscious choice on your part? As usual with these kind of instrumental tracks, variation can become a bit of an issue. I have the same problem often. I bit more of a switch-up in the second half might do the track some good. Maybe adding a synth, changing up the drums, or adding a different melody... Vocal samples might also help in that regard. But these are only suggestions; I feel like overall it's a very chill track that really works well the way it is. And sometimes trying to force too much variation into a track just makes it messy. So in conclusion, big ups for creating this instrumental...it's one of the best tracks I've heard on here in quite a while!
this beat has a nice bounce. the mix feels right. everything seems to work. i feel some of the instruments and sounds good be pushed a bit more. i like the weird horn that is featured in the brake. i think it could be fussed with to feel like it comes more from mars than it does now. i wanna here more outer space sounds and textures. put my right on that beach on Mars. and i think the way to that is just keep fussing with all the sounds to make them more your own. perhaps even the melody loop could have a change. perhaps even another part that feels different than where we are. the track has that nice sunday mellow vibe. i feel that is where you are going with this tune. i get it and like it. just go weirder! and if you know me i normally am asking for more weird! great work. keep going on this beauty!
Greetings @novili, is more to say how much I liked your chill, "Beach On Mars" great title, that transported me to a world of dreams and peace, for those 3:25 min, made me forget all the reality that Sometimes we have to live, but that helps you to be yourself. The audio, very organic, I do not know how the beaches are on Mars, but if they are like your music, they should be great, Thank you very much for your contribution, you have given us a good material, Luck and success!
wassup @novili im liking this groove, simple yet effective, all sounds are clean and hover in their own space. Super chill indeed, this is that top back in a old school impala riding round the city in the summer time music! followed you on soundcloud too! good work
Thanks my friend, appreciate you comin back and giving up some feedback and submitting. :-D
Hey @novili. Thanks for sharing the track! I wasn't sure what to expect with that title, but I'm impressed! It's a super chill track and it's got a great atmosphere throughout. I think the melodies work really well and I'm a fan of the kick drum and the overall trap-influenced drum patterns. I felt like the hi-hats in the background were being drowned out sometimes (like around 2:05), it wouldn't be too bad if they stood out a little more there. But maybe that's also my speakers talking..? Or actually, maybe that was a conscious choice on your part? As usual with these kind of instrumental tracks, variation can become a bit of an issue. I have the same problem often. I bit more of a switch-up in the second half might do the track some good. Maybe adding a synth, changing up the drums, or adding a different melody... Vocal samples might also help in that regard. But these are only suggestions; I feel like overall it's a very chill track that really works well the way it is. And sometimes trying to force too much variation into a track just makes it messy. So in conclusion, big ups for creating this instrumental...it's one of the best tracks I've heard on here in quite a while!
this beat has a nice bounce. the mix feels right. everything seems to work. i feel some of the instruments and sounds good be pushed a bit more. i like the weird horn that is featured in the brake. i think it could be fussed with to feel like it comes more from mars than it does now. i wanna here more outer space sounds and textures. put my right on that beach on Mars. and i think the way to that is just keep fussing with all the sounds to make them more your own. perhaps even the melody loop could have a change. perhaps even another part that feels different than where we are. the track has that nice sunday mellow vibe. i feel that is where you are going with this tune. i get it and like it. just go weirder! and if you know me i normally am asking for more weird! great work. keep going on this beauty!
Greetings @novili, is more to say how much I liked your chill, "Beach On Mars" great title, that transported me to a world of dreams and peace, for those 3:25 min, made me forget all the reality that Sometimes we have to live, but that helps you to be yourself. The audio, very organic, I do not know how the beaches are on Mars, but if they are like your music, they should be great, Thank you very much for your contribution, you have given us a good material, Luck and success!
wassup @novili im liking this groove, simple yet effective, all sounds are clean and hover in their own space. Super chill indeed, this is that top back in a old school impala riding round the city in the summer time music! followed you on soundcloud too! good work