I really like the song, the urban style with all the additives that you put on the track (the dogs, the shots) give the listener the ability to imagine the scenery of a city, maybe a dark neighborhood and a melancholic story, sounds very good, however the piano from 00:45 stun the sound a bit and opaque the voice with its high notes, the brightness of the equalizer may be saturating a bit, I could also advise you to use more props because the stanza sounds empty and something dry because it is only your voice rapping, removing those little details the theme is great, I like the lyrics very much and you have my full support for this contest, greetings and blessings.