Great post but I couldn't read the whole thing. It essentially nerded out on paragraph one and continued from there. It was not easy to read. I would say only someone in college or in this line of work would stop to read this. I see a lot of work and effort went into it. Im guessing your either a college student, extreme feminist or work as a psychologist/therapist. Either way. I commend you for the time and effort but I am a general joe blow (and yes I am a woman) who wanted to read this but was completely turned off by the way its written.
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Which article are you referring to?
My post above, I think.
I am referring to the original post. If you'd like to improve your writing style, my suggestion was to make it easier for the lay person to read. To soulsistashakti, I would expect nothing less from someone clearly sitting behind a computer but then again, people feel free to say what they like through the protection of a screen.
LOL! Go to the library...lol WTF :)