Dreams

in #rishiays30 • 7 years ago

Wait and watch...1st off all...after breaking your dreams, u may get depressed..but.. determine your way..finding the new hope..make your a ray of new hopes, new dreams and set up all necessary steps and requirements to achieve that...one day it will be yours like sun risereceived_1629339033964946.jpeg

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7 years ago in #rishiays30 by
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     7 years ago  

    You have a minor grammatical mistake in the following sentence:

    make your a ray of new hopes, new dreams and set up all necessary steps and requirements to achieve that.
    It should be you're a instead of your a.

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     7 years ago  

    Yaa..my mistake..I think if I erase a then also it will be correct

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