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RE: 🎤 STEEMIT RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #8 SUBMISSION THREAD - GET YOUR REAL ANALYSIS ON SUNDAY 🎧

in #rapchallenge7 years ago (edited)

I'm late to the party but I wanted to get this in here anyway. Appreciate any feedback or if anyone wants to follow me / check out some of my other hip hop posts.

Lyrics:
Walking through the valley, but never fear the shadow,
Going with the flow, up the creek without a paddle,
But keep that on the low, I'll never let them see me sweat,
Sleeping cause I'm slow and steady, but the race ain't finished yet...
...It's a lonely road, but I've been here before,
I'm keeping my word, that's my pen and my throat,
Wear my heart on my sleeve, hear it in every note,
Something greater's coming, read it in every quote
I'm focused and my goal ain't that I don't insult your ego,
If Hope floats, she's on a boat that's off the coast of Sausalito,
Anchored off the pier, cause she's anchored to the fear
Sea levels rising faster than the rent for living here,
She loves it cause the weather's mild, God bless the child
We turning up the heat I wanna see your summer weather style
I'm hot so bet I'm going to the top like a thermometer
I’m so far gone I might have to switch over to kilometers

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You an Outcast fan fo sho, great flow man!
If Hope floats, she's on a boat that's off the coast of Sausalito,
Anchored off the pier, cause she's anchored to the fear

whats good brotha, you are late to the submission So i cant judge you...but this is FIRE!! I would love to see you come back to the challenge and drop officially..this is really good brotha.. here are the official rules..

  • Upvote & Resteem this post (support good initiatives)
  • Every Sunday, I will post 3 new instrumentals for participants.
  • Download the instrumental and record a video of yourself rapping over it.
  • Upload the video and post it here on SteemIT with the first tag as #rapchallenge
  • Post your submission as a comment on the rap challenge blog submission post on Friday.
  • Videos no longer than 1 minute long.
  • Raps can be freestyles or written raps.
  • DO NOT alter the instrumental in any way.
  • Video MUST BE SUBMITTED every Friday by 11:59PM (UTC-4:00) (NYC TIME)

Yeah I was late to drop on Friday, so I almost didn't post. But I already had my verse, so I figured I'd go ahead and submit for kicks. I'll try to get in officially for next week.

I got you buddy my post with your analysis will go up in an hour or so.