People definitely sleeping on your knowledge
You are awake in this conscious awareness
Pretty chill wordplay, fun rhythmic laid back flow,
but your performance lacks conviction
in the beginning half, but the more you kept rapping
The more your confidence grew and your style showed
the last few lines what you ended up is how your entire rap should have started out on that level of energy and performance and built up even more from that point
Slow start, but nice ending
I like your lyrics, definitely not cliche or too predictable bro.
Put more emphasis and clarity on the diction and enunciation and the punchline rhymes at the end to make it pop more
especially since your verse has a real message
Nice entry though, I hope my suggestions helped you, I will check out your other two entries soon
Nice!! Thank you brotha....This is what I need in order to perfect my craft. I really appreciate the time you took to write this. This is amazing! Your suggestions will definitely help me.
Yeah bro...which one are you thinking bout? I usually smoke a fat one and listen to all three until something magically appears....like something from the heavens lol
Nice! 222222222 is out there now!! (well only in the steemit world!) Def feel free to show me what u got!!!!!! Always up for making music!
... We just jammin over here man! check it!!! All lo-fi, quickfire shit to get heads linking up!!
I'm 'passin' u the mic!' !!!! haha!!
People definitely sleeping on your knowledge
You are awake in this conscious awareness
Pretty chill wordplay, fun rhythmic laid back flow,
but your performance lacks conviction
in the beginning half, but the more you kept rapping
The more your confidence grew and your style showed
the last few lines what you ended up is how your entire rap should have started out on that level of energy and performance and built up even more from that point
Slow start, but nice ending
I like your lyrics, definitely not cliche or too predictable bro.
Put more emphasis and clarity on the diction and enunciation and the punchline rhymes at the end to make it pop more
especially since your verse has a real message
Nice entry though, I hope my suggestions helped you, I will check out your other two entries soon
Nice!! Thank you brotha....This is what I need in order to perfect my craft. I really appreciate the time you took to write this. This is amazing! Your suggestions will definitely help me.
You're most welcome bro, I give my heart soul and mind in everything that I do, especially when it comes to my faith and music.
Great job Miggie. Came through to show some love.
Thanks brotha! Good luck in the next round lol
Same to you. Have you seen the beat selection for this week? BANANAS!!!
Yeah bro...which one are you thinking bout? I usually smoke a fat one and listen to all three until something magically appears....like something from the heavens lol
LoL. From the heavens...
Yo Bro!! You up for jammin on this beat!!!??? https://steemit.com/mcs/@termitemusic/calling-all-mcs-and-singers-of-earth-i-wanna-jam-with-you-mc-challenge
Damn bro....I'm sure I'll get on one of these soon... What about the 2222 beat bro?? Got any plans for that one?? Lol
Nice! 222222222 is out there now!! (well only in the steemit world!) Def feel free to show me what u got!!!!!! Always up for making music!
... We just jammin over here man! check it!!! All lo-fi, quickfire shit to get heads linking up!!
I'm 'passin' u the mic!' !!!! haha!!
Thank you brotha...now that I have your blessing, I will definitely write something to that dope ass beat.
Nice 1 bruvva!! dope!!! I see ya gifs!! peace out man!!!
Ayyyyeee lol thank you brotha!!!
safe geeezer!!!!!
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