Hi! You asked me to check your post, so here I am. :-). I see you really put a lot of effort in your post. The first thing I see is the title is very long. Maybe a tip to make it shorter. Another thing is, I am a member of the @sndbox community. I can nominate you if you want? the rules are: You have to write minimum 300 words ( this is really for you!), use at least 3 images, original content, post max 1 a day and you an upvote from @sndbox for 25% for every post. BUT you have to pay a monthly fee of 60 SBD at the end of the month. Tell me, if you are interested. If so, I can nominate you to @sndbox. They will check all your posts and you have to fill I a form, where you have to write why you should be a member of the community.