Part 5 of the Techist- A Spacer Story. End of Book One

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PREVIOUSLY- Maaz Techist, a young gifted mech/ comptech aboard the scavenger ship Moonshine is the lone survivor of a pirate ambush. He escapes and flies off with a Jovian prototype ( a new kind of space ship of unknown capabilities) installing his own AI Tank in the ship's computers. When he is chased by the pirate leader Shira One-Arm, Maaz manages to escape into a Wormhole. He discovers that he can Navigate inside the Tunnel and survives his trip, surfacing near Venus. A Dr. Bruna Fedli contacts him, claiming to the builder of the ship.

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Dr. Nora Fisher was upset enough to ingest mood altering chemicals and submitting to a ten minute underwater session. Even after undergoing various surgical procedures for enhancements to bodily functions and anti-ageing therapy, ninety two years was old age and she did not wish to tax her body more than required. After a few hours of immersing herself in mundane work she felt good enough to deal with the loss of Phoenix. She called Shira via encrypted holo, soon an image of Shira solidified in front of her.

"Yes boss."

Dr. Nora did not mince words. "You let the Phoenix go."

"Nobody knew there was a hacker on board the Moonshine."

"You should have had the ship under guard."

"And he could have died;" Shira did not back down. "And with the same results."

"I need to speak to Bruna."

"You want us to back to Saturn Dark."

"Yes. Immediately. And this was the last mistake you will make. Remember the bomb inside your shoulder."

Shira's face went cold and dark. "I never forget."

"Send me a blip when you have Bruna with you."

Dr. Nora sat back, thinking about her chat with the temporary captain of the Phoenix. Had she made any mistakes?

Maaz had chosen to go after the sensor cluster which was sending messages to Dr. Fedli and he had Tank to help him. After six hours of mapping and isolating code he learned that this would take a while, though physically the cluster was wired into the ship via just three nodes, it's software was deeply embedded into the systems.

"Tank, this Dr. Fedli is damn good. Huh?"

"She was considered a genius by many of her peers."

"Really?"

"She along with three other scientists was allowed by the Jovian leaders a huge budget and the best techs. the project was called "Second Coming", they were building new long range weapons and spacecraft."

"Of course! She mentioned Mirage Station. So we are really sitting inside Lost Technology. OK Tank. I am through the first gate. Shut down power to the cluster and I am through. And where is Dr. Fedli now? Check the latest journals also."

"Dr. Fedli is supposed to have died in prison two years ago."

"So she was either lying or she is on the run. Anyway, lets see if I am in."

The sensor cluster was not so easy to break into. And physical access would require cutting into the ship from outside. After two more days of trying Maaz was still not able to gain control. He was studying the diagrams when he noticed that one of the nodes could be accessed from the inside. He decided to burn the node and see what happens. As it is; he wasn't going anywhere without the fake Dr. Fedli knowing.

Tank shut down all power except the core and Maaz cut open small circle in the wall next to the airlock. He then went on to burn the node using a small laser. When the power was restored he was in for a surprise.

"Tank, can you access the cluster?"

"Maaz, I have partial access but I can't stop the transmission. And we now have a cloaking program."

"What's a cloaking program?"

"This ship has hundreds of projectors on the outside. When needed the project an image of the ship hundreds of meters away from where we are, the range is nearly twenty miles. At this time the ship will be cloaked from all sensors while the image will show up on the computers of anyone following or attacking the ship."

"Galaxies! She was right. We have stumbled onto something big. And I think this ship has many more secrets."

Maaz did not want to let go of the ship, he was hooked to this mystery. With the sensors still transmitting to that Dr. Fedli he wanted to go as far away from her as possible.

"Tank. We are going back into the tunnel. And we are going far; to a new sun."

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I'm thinking about running an art/music/writing contest with a 1000 HIVE prize pool.

The theme will be "Cyber Pirates versus Werewolf Ninjas".

There's some sort of conflict between the Cyber Pirates and the Werewolf Ninjas and at the mid-point, they encounter a LogicZombie and both sides believe it's some sort of enemy agent working for the other side. Perhaps a little "Yojimbo". I'm thinking each of the characters could be based on the MTBI personalities, with the LogicZombie being INTP of course, and the Cyber Pirates tending toward the "Sentinels" types and the Werewolf Ninjas tending towards the "Explorers" types - LINK FOR REFERENCE

The writing could be a key scene or character introduction or a short-story or something like a television pilot if you're feeling inspired.

I have an idea that each of the characters is motivated by PRIMARY AXIOMS that could be given some other name in the story. These PRIMARY AXIOMS would be like logic chips in the brains of the Cyber Pirates and perhaps like some sort of symbiotic organism or magical stones in the bellies (or embedded into the backs) of the Werewolf Ninjas. Only the LogicZombie knows these things exist and teaches both sides to identify their own PRIMARY AXIOMS (sometimes through battle). I've imagined a scene where a regional warlord encounters the LogicZombie wandering through their territory and the warlord tries to intimidate the LogicZombie with different logical fallacies, like an appeal to popularity (I'm known throughout the nine kingdoms) or an appeal to terror (I've vanquished 10,000 warriors in single combat). But the LogicZombie doesn't hear very well, and actually doesn't see very well either, so brandishing impressive weapons and barking threats don't have much effect.

Anyway.

Let me know if this sounds interesting to you.

😍 😍 😍 This is great. My PRIMARY AXIOMS are all for it.

Right, and all submissions would be Creative Commons Zero with no attribution required in order to allow a community of unaffiliated artists/musicians/and writers to freely build on these characters and ideas, kind of like how nobody can "own" ancient myths or fairy tales.

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