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My Greetings To You!
The theme for Steemit Poetry Contest #8 - Illusions
About Prizes:
Attention! Due to the fact that SteemDollar is really high! Since Steemit Poetry Contest #8 I reduced prizes but, as a result, I increased the number of prize places. That, in the beginning, was First Place with 15SD ~ 15USD, now 7SD ~ 70 USD. Of course get first place and 150 USD (15SD) very nice :) But good... no... EXCELLENT poems more and more and it's hard for me to leave them authors without encouragement. So I decided that it would be more correct! Now there are seven prizes! And even the seventh place with the prize of 1 SBD, it's more than last place with 5 SBD (in USD) on start... In any case, feel free to write your opinion about it!
First Place - 7 SBD
Second Place - 6 SBD
Third Place - 5 SBD
Fourth Place - 4 SBD
Fifth Place - 3 SBD
Sixth Place - 2 SBD
Seventh Place - 1 SBD
Entries will be accepted within five days from the date of publication of an announcement!
Deadline - December 17 12:30 AM UTC
The winners of the Steemit Poetry Contest #7
1st Place - "Home" by @moeknows I really felt it! It's so simple, without special "cunning" metaphors... but the expression, feelings! Bravo!
I wrote a verse so terse
It disbursed my soul
I sneer, jeer and curse
Wherever I go
I growl when I talk
And I carry a scowl
Attack ears like a hawk
With words so foul
I'm in a terrible mood
Crude down to the bone
Counting the days
till I return home
2nd Place - "Over the Ridge" by @csbegu The opposite case - a lot of metaphors! I'm just sure that my mediocre knowledge of English will not let me fully realize all the beauty of this poem... I re-read it many times - goosebumps every time! Very beautiful!
Over the ridge there are lions,
Over the ridge there are warriors of old,
Over the ridge there are waterfalls crying,
And the mountains of water are flowing with gold.
Over the ridge there are cowherds,
Over the ridge there are maidens in sight,
Over the ridge there are leaves never-dying,
And the forests are glowing with chants of delight.
Over the ridge there is memory,
Over the ridge there’s a mother in wait,
Over the ridge there’s no danger of treachery,
And the old man is crying for his soon joyful fate.
3rd Place - "What is home?" by @calluna "Home is comfy clothing and no need to wear a bra" - After reading this line, I smiled... girls are such girls :) Seriously, from this poem warmth breathe!
Home is a dog that loves you, waiting at the door
Home is flopping on the sofa, not doing any more
Home is the person, who accepts you are you are
Home is comfy clothing and no need to wear a bra
Home is a smile, a waiting cup of tea
Home is a flicking hearth, and smoking chimney
Home is a hiding place, on the very worst day
Home is a hug, the promise that you'll be ok
Home is not a place, made from bricks or stone
Home is not a thing, that you can build or own
Home is a feeling, something we can share
Home is waiting, it will always be there
Rules of The Contest!
Only one entry is allowed.
Your entry-post must be tagged both #poetry and #poetrycontest
The Title must be "SteemitPoetryContest #(with the number of the actual episode)" + the name of your poem.
You can use any types of rhyme - End rhyme, Cross rhyme, Internal etc.
The size of the poem - three quatrains (one quatrain = four lines).
Do not steal! The contest is only original works!
I wish everyone good luck and creativity!
Let's make STEEMIT more interesting and varied together!
Sincerely, Terry Craft.
My entry. #8. https://steemit.com/poetry/@khackett/steemitpoetrycontest-8-give-the-illusion
My entry for #8: https://steemit.com/poetrycontest/@johnwjr7/illusions
https://steemit.com/poetry/@bcrafts/steemitpoetrycontest-8-mask-of-illusion-faefb5a6eef4f
My entry to your contest
Here's my entry https://steemit.com/poetrycontest/@ajremy/steemit-poetry-contest-8-illusory-tragedy
Thank you @terrycraft for giving me a reason to write poetry, an excuse really. Blessings to you and yours.
MY ENTRY
A really good one
My entry
https://steemit.com/poetrycontest/@kesolink/steemitpoetrycontest-8-self-imagination-20171213t17354478z
Hi @terrycraft i hope you're doing well , here is my entry :
https://steemit.com/poetry/@educ.leb/steemitpoetrycontest-8-country-of-illusions
Country of illusions
When i stay alone some illusions comes to me,
Those pictures & feelings really scares me.
To profit from this sensation i close my eyes,
The feeling becomes big,you can't imagine the size.
At first I see myself flying to a faraway country,
right there peoples become easily rich and happy .
I knew this country .. yes i knew it !
I searched it & finaly i find it !
Without a doubt i trusted this illusion ,
My heart beats very fast thinking of a conclusion.
I open my eyes .. am i awake? is it reality?
Im afraid to know, afraid not to know ,oh Unfortunately !
I am not sure if i've chosen the correct place to post this . this is my entry for contest#8" the complaint."
I am writing this to complain,
I'm going to lose again ,
no one seems to care .
The rules are just so unfair.
Like who knows what a quatrain is,
this really takes the piss.
and why can't I copy from the someone like keats.
All these new poets he beats.
And we are supposed to make it all rhyme ,
Well maybe for some that is fine ,
I'm not gonna win . I don't see the point,
can winners be joint?
oops missed that there was a theme - or did I ?
Hi :) Yes, there is a certain theme and the poem should be a separate post, not a comment!
Thanks for that. new to steemit this week . I've some catching up to do but ill get there.i tried separate post as well #poems #poetrycontest #8.
a way i could qualify this to meet the illusion theme criteria ,the poem is written as a complaint letter .but really it is a poem . thus there is the illusion.
https://steemit.com/poetry/@gb-the-grey/steemitpoetrycontest-8-the-complaint
you are suppose to write it as a post and then enter the tags #poetrycontest and write the specific headline. then drop the post link here in the comment section.
My entry click here
Good post... Please Help me by Upvote on my Comments...!
My entry:
https://steemit.com/tag/@tcpaikano/ilusion-de-amor
Hi @terrycraft . Here is my entry....
https://steemit.com/poetry/@safat/steemitpoetrycontest-8-illusion
I sincerely hope I thrill you with my entry... https://steemit.com/poetry/@asaj/steemit-poetry-contest-8-broken-reflection
This is my entry
https://steemit.com/poetrycontest/@mhizoptic/steemitpoetrycontest-episode-8-illusion
Thank you for the contest
Wow, Very nice post. I really liked it.
Thanks.
Here is my entry ;) : https://steemit.com/poetry/@fightcancer/steemitpoetrycontest-8-inside-me
Inside me ...
Where ... !! It's hard to explaine those demons inside ,
Those illusions make me feel high .
The daily struggle , the daily Ride,
When will they go? when will they end.
Those Terrible thoughts That they send?
They make me feel hate my self .
They fill my head With Torture and doubts,
Im tired from crying...
Im tired from trying they won't go out from my inside...
I wish i could believe Those demons were lying.
It's a constant battle between them and me...
I just want to end It all and be free...
https://steemit.com/poetry/@cadwell/steem-poetrycontest-8-my-greatest-illusion
Here is my submission ..... https://steemit.com/poetrycontest/@awolesigideon/steemitpoetrycontest-8-the-woman-with-the-lofty-nose
Hi @terrycraft , great contest , here is my entry .. hope you like it
https://steemit.com/poetry/@minitnow/steemit-poetry-contest-8-the-unknown
The Unknown
Thinking about what gone ..
The days i was thought that im swiming in the sea of life,
But im just dumping beneath in a wave..
Taking me away from the where...
I can't see where im...
Just darkness... hell!!who im?
Im losing control .. im fulling on,
My mind has been taking away from me.
Please!! come back & blow me as used to be before.
My entry https://steemit.com/poetry/@resteemyourpost/steemit-poetry-contest-8-slave
Slave ...
So many choices, so many chances.
Words pound inside my head like a drum ,
I don't know what to be done.
I lost my life boat long ago.
Now im all on my own,
Trying to get what forever gone.
I want to be me and recover my self.
Let me change , let me be what i want,
My own self want to get free and live life.
good contest men thank you for información
Nice post! I followed you, looking forward to see more awesome post of you in the future. Don't forget to follow me back. I also upvoted this.
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Wow friend great work, yes due to the rise of sbd price, the reward become too high. I like your decision to make seventh prizes. Thanks, and congrats to the winners, I will try in next level. How are you doing my friend, wish you a very beautiful time ahead.
Hi! I'm not very well, but don't want to give up :) Thank for kind words.
Hi friend, sorry to hear that. What is the problem? Please share with me, you can contact me at whatsapp no 9854177653.we are friends so please I want to know about you, have a great time friend, stay blessed and healthy.
Good. But i dont really understand what the contest is about
this is my poem https://steemit.com/poetry/@samhamou/steemitpoetrycontest-8-i-searched
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Thank you.
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Congrats all. On to the next one.
Thank you for selecting me. I can't really tell you how much I appreciate it.
Congratulations! Your poem really got into my brain and reminded me of those times when I myself was far from home...
This is a very nice contest especially for those writers who love to write poem @ terrycraft.
Great Job, Keep it up!
LOVE
@micch
Here is my entry. Thank you for hosting!
https://steemit.com/poetry/@wandrnrose7/steemitpoetrycontest-8-trial-of-illusions
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This is my contribution. Fingers crossed.
https://steemit.com/poetry/@nicholas83/steemit-poetry-contest-8-the-is-that-is
me too I like the old steem logo, I don't know what they change it ? :(
Hi. @terrycraft here is my entry
https://steemit.com/poetry/@cynthia03/steemit-poetry-contest-geezer-aa65ac5b5193c
My entry
https://steemit.com/poetry/@bubeanim/steemit-poetry-contest-8-light-in-my-darkest-hour
https://steemit.com/poetry/@odesanya/steemitpoetrycontest
Hi @terrycraft here is my entry
https://steemit.com/poetrycontest/@phunke/steemit-poetry-contest-8-how-do-i-tell-you-20171213t15538811z
Hello @terrycraft , here's the link to my entry :
https://steemit.com/poetry/@arcrypto/steemitpoetrycontest-8-my-journey-to-steem
My journey to Steem
My journey to Steem
At 5, I really loved cream 😋
But at 21, I fell in love with steem ♨
Earning 7 SBD through this contest is my dream ♨💵
It will add to my life, a pinch of gleam 💥
Sitting under the sun's shaft 🌞
Looking at the people along the riverside raft 🚣
I have written this poem on my draft 📄
For poetry contest organized by @terrycraft 🐳
You can upvote, comment and resteem to support me 👍
Which will make me dance with glee 💃
Since earning SBD is not my cup of tea ☕
Oh no! I need to go and wee wee 😂
--
@arcrypto 👨
https://steemit.com/poetry/@sophyna/the-pressure
Oh my word!!! Oh gosh i am so blown away! I have literally run round the house and woken everyone up to tell them. Thank you so much, I have been really struggling this year with finding the motivation to write, so this really does mean so much to me. Thank you for running these!!!
Hi! I featured this post in my article, Top 3 things that get attention on Steemit :)
https://steemit.com/steem/@dfrankle/top-3-things-that-get-attention-on-steemit
Check it out!
hmm very good contest i join soon @terrycraft
my entry for #8 : https://steemit.com/poetry/@paulthebeloved/steemitpoetrycontest-8-slave
Suerte a todos :) / good luck to all :)
my https://steemit.com/poetry/@alejoclawful/steemit-poetry-contest-8-frozen-king
Here is my entry - thank you @terrycraft!
https://steemit.com/poetry/@geke/steemitpoetrycontest-8-steem-s-oasis
My entry mates!! https://steemit.com/poetry/@louielowa/steemit-poetry-contest-purest-illusion