You're welcome. I wouldn't call them corrections, because I might as well be wrong, they are merely suggestions :P Always go for the maximum impact emotionally, wherever you feel it might not be achieving it, rewrite. That's my tip. It could be that a reader doesn't capture the emotional intensity you observe, so value your opinion more than mine :)
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Yeah. One thing a poet knows is that poetry is subject to interpretation. The way one reader perceives it differs from another poet's perception of it. That's why we appreciate poetry. Poetry has long since moved from the era of meters and rhymes to more prosaic and narrative forms. Thus , the poet has much words at his disposal and his thoughts aren't restricted. Thanks. Appreciate. For reading and analysing