Great poem about the kind of consciousness we should all aspire to! I can't help but note, on an editing level, that the "millions of miles" should have the pronoun "them" instead of "it" in the last line, but forget about that: great work!
Great poem about the kind of consciousness we should all aspire to! I can't help but note, on an editing level, that the "millions of miles" should have the pronoun "them" instead of "it" in the last line, but forget about that: great work!
Thank you, my english isn't that great
No worries at all! That makes the poem more extraordinary, in fact.