Why do I write?
A lyric without meaning
Is like a guy who stopped dreaming
Keeping my words fresh
Saves me from emotional death
A pen and a paper
A keyboard with functioning keys
And regular screen
Is all that I need
Once I start writing or typing
Everything just comes out
Be it love, be hate
These words are the ones I'd like to shout
There's no doubt about it
I never knew I could write
It started with a poem in one of my classes
We were told to write about WW II's ashes
From there it continued on
I've had people ask me to put it in song
I love writing these poems
They make me feel home
They allow me to vent
They allow me to think
They allow my to plan
They allow me to walk on emotional dry land
These poems are like float
They keep my mind from sinking like a hole filled boat
These poems are saving grace
These poems have shaped my face
These poems give me some meaning
These poems are my life
These poems are all my feelings
And one day I'll read 'em to my wife
By Ethan
2017/09/03
Love the passion
Having a passion is giving meaning to our life
continues on track.
I love the easy manner you write. Just let the words flow. That's it. I should write more poetry. Thanks.
really , this is excellent writing , I like your writing :)
Thank you :D
master @xxsenpaixsamaxx wow thanks for sharing...love it..upvoted,,kindly see my post need your support..thanks,,https://steemit.com/phillipines/@mrblu/do-you-love-me-enough-to-let-me-go-boyfriend-and-girlfriend-breakups-mrblu-poem
thats so sweet... u discovered ur right talent.. and i really mean it.. u r really very very good at poems... and the best part of ur poem that touched my heart is that about telling these all to ur wife one day.. a magical moment that will be...
a few lines for ur poetry praise...( i m not as good as u so don't mind my mistakes in that)
early or late u have realised it..
whats hidden inside u..
early or late u will get it...
what this world has hidden for u..
hehe ... m so sorry i am really nt good in poetry bt i just tried to praise a poet in a style he may like more :D
good luck!
I really appreciate it, your comment really made my day :) I hope you stick arounfd :D
@xxsenpaixsamaxx upvoted your post..kindly see my post too..
https://steemit.com/poetry/@dontryme2/missing-you-poem-hope-you-like-it-guys
Keep at it. Your craft is too relatable to stop :)
This was pretty cool actually. Rings true about why I think many of us write poetry.
A poem more than wonderful will be a real follower of you and your support continued wonderful work
You are a very talented poet. I enjoy your work.
I run out of words to say except that "It's awesome!"
You have a talent of an artist. Keep it up!
lovely lines, upvoted
Nice poem..Followed by you
You are welcome to follow me as well.....
great , I ve followed you am waiting you next post !
The double life thing. I'm tired of snacking lived your steel. Maybe I've been sick. The fact that I, like you, dual!
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Well structured and flows quite nicely. Keep up your passion mate and will follow to hear more of them.
Hace mucho tiempo que desearía poder volver a escribir algo como esto. Gracias por compartir ese poema. Saludos
welcome steemit....
Hopefully in this steemit we can support each other, and know each other, I think you are a very good writer, I am waiting for your best work in this steemit, I salam @ auliaramadhn, if you like my comments follow and upvote, I will do the same for you. thanks.
this is my intro site
https://steemit.com/introduceyourself/@auliaramadhn/hello-im-new-member-join-here-to-steemit-201793t201323520z
Ethan, I really loved this one because it said a lot about you and how your passion grew from a WWII 's ashes. I also loved that you used your poems to vent and express. That is beautiful because you were writing about real feelings, real pains, real you. The best words are from the heart and inner being. Your can't fake it. Keep writing because you have a gift and you need to allow that gift to grow. Best of all you have that element of hope for the future.
By the way, you love Japanese anime. Have you ever been to Japan? Maybe in the future if they ever have a Steemfest in Japan, you can go. I went about two years ago and had an amazing time. Even for my age, I love anime! I really enjoy it a lot.
You wanted me to let you know about my posts. I just did one late last night so here is the site: https://steemit.com/steemiteducation/@cabbagepatch/autism-and-neuroplasticity-a-new-hope. I'm not sure if you will like it but I've written about Neuroplasticity a new advancement in medical research where they found that the brain can actually recreate itself. It is fascinating news. Please take care!.....Cabbagepatch!
I would love to go do anything in Japan :D I will go and indulge in your writing :)
You have a gift
So passionate. Keep it up. Upvoted your post!!! @xxsenpaixsamaxx
Please take time to read mine. It would be much appreciated :-) thanks!
https://steemit.com/poem/@athenabree08/my-true-love
Will do :0
You're really good at this @xxsenpaixsamaxx. Great poem as usual! And I bet your wife would really appreciate your poems. Good Job! :)
I hope one day she will when she appears :)
She sure will. :)
Your poems were written beautifully and I love your works!
I wrote my first poem for a class too!
I posted it on my blog, give it a check and tell me what you think about it too! :)
send me a link I'll gladly give it a look
Follow me guys 😊
Nice words you hear the meaning behind the words thanks for sharing :)
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Resteem My poem post Thanks :)