That won't break me
That won't break me
My hides thick like a tree
I'm stronger than you think
I'm hard tungsten, not malleable zinc
That won't break me
Your stings are insignificant like bees
That razor sharp tongue of yours
Has no effect, might as well shut your jaws
That won't break me
You are as insignificant as a flee
You are a minor inconvenience
But you have no power, no influence
That won't break me
You will never get me on my knees
You will never have the power
To take over me not even in my darkest hour
I'm indestructible, there's no use
Stop. Think for a while over your self abuse
By Ethan
2017/06/30
Wow to this really famous unbreakable item. :D
Well your poetry is so nice. It's written in such a lucid manner but it does not fail to bring out the emotion that you want it to convey. Really a very good poem. It deserves all the upvotes that have come it's way.
PS: the other unbreakable item is also very adorable. :D
:D Nokia my love, my one and only ♥
Hahahahahhaa :D
I see your love is so strong and is never going to hurt you and even get hurt himself. :D
I just hope your love story is everlasting, I mean your love is everlasting and you enjoy each other's company a lot. Keep spreading love and keep loving your only love. ;)
Thank you I shall continue :)
Great
This poem is a perfect motivation for me, 7 years ago due to an accident my spinal cord got damaged and i am unable to walk since then, and life is very hard for me in a third world country, and every day i tell myself in my own language that this disability won't break me, so thank you for these nice words @xxsenpaixsamaxx
I'm glad I was able to help :)
Oh my goodness I love the unbreakable item!!! I used to have one of those those, I would literally throw it I the ground to prove that's it was invinsible!!! Then one day I did that, and it broke for good!
:D I love Nokia's
@xxsenpaixsamaxx I enjoyed reading your poem!
it takes courage to rhyme, like a poet divine read these words best believe i'm going to shine, now the bottom line is this..I followed you now reciprocate it and stay in bliss!
Thank you :)
Inspiring to read this after a tough day of dealing with things that want to break me. Keep writing:)
Thank you, may your will to persevere burn bright.
I love this line!
That won't break me
You will never get me on my knees
You will never have the power
To take over me not even in my darkest our
But you might wanna change the "our" to "hour" ?
Just thought that you might have meant that. Thanks for sharing. Kinda needed it, that season of life :) Cheers!!
#follow4follow
Thank you :) I will correct it :)
“All I have in this world is my balls and my word, and I don’t break them for no one.” - Tony Montana
Really awesome :)
Great poem, when you said "That won't break me,My hides thick like a tree" had a really vivid image of my body being as big as a tree lolz. Motivational for sure.
Thank you :)
amazing poem loved it
Nice and wise peom I really love it. Keep it
@misty1z
Are you a Nigerian? I am just wondering though
I'm Ghanaian and you
@misty1z I'm a Nigerian and i think we are quite close
Yes
Thank you :)
You are welcome
Very good poem indeed, thanks for sharing
What a cryptic poem, I really enjoyed the read, sadly I am the opposite of this. Everything breaks me, people stairs, people words, peoples body language. I guess that why I am who I am.
You will one day find the strength, In believing in yourself you will become what you need to be!
Inspirational poem there. Following you now
Thank you!
*no power (you wrote now power)
Love it, keep 'em coming, upvoted!
Thank you, I apologize
Very poignant poem that shows your inner strength, self determination and perseverance. It reminds me of an old song called "I Will Survive" by Gloria Gaynor. When I went through my divorce, I listened to this song over and over, which gave me my inner self the strength to persevere and move forward. Your poem will do the same for many others!
Thank you!
Beautiful poem buddy , that Nokia at the end tho haha
XD nokia forever
Very nice and heart touching poem. thanks for this post.
Followed you hop u follow back and upvote my comment
:) maybe, Thank you for voting :)
what a poem man.....and the unbreakable thing is epic :)
Thank you mate
STRONG!!!
awesome receiving your short pieces of inspiration...thanks brother!
Thank you :)
Nice post,
Love seeing all kinds of artists on here.
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This is great id love to see more of your work.upvoted and followed
Awsome! You've really written a great poem @xxsenpaixsamaxx. I've become your fan. Keep up the good work.
Thank you !! :)
It feels like you have been in such a situation were you refuse to back down and break apart. The strong usage of words seem to be coming from a strong gut feeling. Great poem, loved it!
Thank you, The only way to write a poem is through experiencing life :)
wow, i think this would make a really nice song :)
I published one poem you can follow me at @raisinbran
Thank you :)
Nice, how long have you been writing.
Nice poem! If you would like to read my latest feel free to see this post Enjoy!
Beautiful :) .. very inspiring poetry.:) I always enjoy them..
I feel like a lot of my poetry is not been seen on steemit
can you give me any tips???
Well my own personal law is "Consistency is key"
But that can only take you so far, Another would be to try to make friends, actively engaging in groups and comment will allow people to see you and follow you :)
Youre a little star :)x
Loved your poem, thought up a verse to converse.
That wont break me,
you can bring an army,
you can ask me 'you and what army'
to that i say go play with your horny barbies
Follow me for poetry and yes i friggin love anime as well.
I love your verse XD It's awesome!
much appreciated :D
I certainly keep learning from you, following your steps bro
Thanks man :)
Nice poetry, I like the concept :) very nice use of the unbreakable item at the end haha, the message you convey is very well thought out well done
Nice post, and nokia 3310 is really an "unbreakable item."
Thank you :)