Poem / Foolishness

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Foolishness

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F oolishness of my mind
O ver thinking all the time
O ver reacting to missjudged signs
L istening to the lies
I nstilled deep in my mind
S tupid for not listening to the warning
H avin no care about my global warming
N ever taking the advise
E very person has told me twice
S leeping with both eyes closed
S tupendiously oblivious to the threat imposed

2017/08/21

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A simple but really good poem about over thinking, not reading the signs. We all do that all the time and then we pay for the consequences. Some times we go about like seeing only what we want to see. I really enjoyed this poem. Thank-you Ethan for creating it! :D

Blinded by the tinted shades hanging over our faces that are only permeable to things we want to see :)

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im loving this poem . a hundred likes for this

Foolishness is not natural, but foolishness is carelessness.

Very nice poem, which makes one think!!

Well done! I love acrostic poems, they're so fun! I'm very familiar with the feeling myself.. anxiety can be a bitch sometimes