Real missed

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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The pain is unanswered
Capable of dropping me who is thought to be tough
You take me, you take a dream
The first we carved together
It's like I've never been a big part of your days

We'd better get over here
Before the beautiful story replaced bitter hurt
Not that I give up easily, but it's wise
Understand when to stop
I'm waiting, but not forever

You take me, you take a dream
The first we carved together
It's like I've never been a big part of your days
As if the promises and words that had been lost lost meaning

We'd better get over here
Before the beautiful story replaced bitter hurt
Not that I give up easily, but it's wise
Understand when to stop
I'm waiting but not forever

I will not deter love
Sweet and bitter I received
Now our story ends with meaning

We'd better get over here
Before the beautiful story replaced bitter hurt
Not that I give up easily, but it's wise
Understand when to stop
I'm waiting, but not forever
I'm waiting
But not forever

@wulan

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Beautiful and well written!

hello bro i like your post well written :)

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Beautifully written @wulan :)

i agree with you bro 100%

nice poetry

hey bro i read your entire post well written and documented

Your poetry skills are so exceptional

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Congrats achieving something in steemit and loved your poetry. Please give me some suggestions for steemit achievement.

Very nice poetry and photo thanks for sharing I really like your poetry

Don't wait, move on and keep going.

Beautiful.... There is such melancholy in this, and yet, a bit of light and hope sneaks in. Lovely.

Wow. This is very deep. I love it! Thank you so much for sharing.

Regards,

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Nice poem...

Yes, if there's any emotion that is bitter and sweet at the same time, it is love. Thank you for sharing.

Puisi yang lumayan bagus ..selamat berkaya kawan