A Remembrance
You became a love to remember
Easy kisses, languishing on hot coals of desire
Your eyes burned
tales of mystery
Arms enclose caverns of my dreams
I fell, spinning in your well, precipice
of fire
I did not burn
Yet candles wax my skin with rivers every turn.
image my own taken by writer/photographer Peter Manik, NY, NY
This poem is inspired by an old friend who took an extended haitus from Twitter. He goes by the handle @AshBaghet and once shared daily prompts with poets worldwide. He recently returned and I attribute much of my growth through poetry from writing for his Twitter prompts several years ago when I found him. I hope that you enjoy the poetry!
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Absolutely beautiful! I love the line:
Arms enclose caverns of my dreams
So beautiful. So descriptive. Fantastic job!
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
Of couse friend! I loved it!
hugs!
A thousand hugs back
Thanks, dear lady!
Your very welcome! ♡
Why do you not burn? You seemed very hot at that moment. You and your lover must have been playing with candles.
Hot poetry. Hot lady. Lady on fire. Yet you do not burn.
Joe
@joe.nobel
science fiction, fantasy, erotica
Thanks @joe.nobel. I appreciate the review <3 :)
This is a very intense poetry and it matches also with the beautiful portrait 😊
Thank you, my dear @f3nix.
Oh wow, this is delightfully intense!
Thank you for the wonderful compliment. It's surprising what a one word prompt can inspire!
Yes that is so true!
First of all... I love that photo :)
Then comes the beauty of skillfully woven words. It's true when they say we express ourselves better poetry. Awesome freewrite :)
Thank you for the kind encouragement. It means a lot! <3
Gorgeous photo, @wandrnrose7.
Love these lines. Beautifully written poem.
Thank you so much! <3 the photo was taken 3 years back. He is a good photographer!