This is like a poem, but it is very lyrical. Basically it is a cool story about a lady that isn't what she seems. Check it out and let me know what you think. This is a little different.
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The Glamours Guest
The glamorous guest with the fabulous dress enchanting on her entrance
… a breath that each man felt in his chest… bewitching the men senseless
Elegance enticing, attractive and inviting
The allure is the lure, sexy and exciting
Not one pair of eyes danced around the room
Not one mind wandered, it wanted to consume
The beauty so flagrant, deliciously fragrant
Meanwhile the crowed ignored the vagrant
Meandering coup, cautiously moves
Manipulating a locked door… magically through
She greets and charms, talks of coats and arms
And moats and farms, While he beats alarms
Dashes fast to a false wall, a monster cache in the master bath
Blast-proof, massively cast… but breaking safes is why he mastered math
Toasts and cheers, dancing of heirs
Wine and beers, boasting careers
But she’s all ears… just waiting for the sign
While hiding fears… a dozen men in line
Suddenly she faints… falls back off the chair
Legs in the air…
Cries of despair…
“She can’t breathe!”
One lady declared…
Emergency call
“She can’t breathe at all!”
Crowd was rich
They got there quick
Loaded her up
Carried her out
Well wishes
The crowd started to shout as the ambulance began its route…
Five minutes past… another siren blast
Medics take action to a very confused cast
“But the other ambulance already took the lady tonight!”
We’re the only one in the area. "Something doesn’t sound right.
Jefferson, go check my things.” The precious gem magnate screamed
.
.
“Sir, it’s gone.”
What about behind the wall and pit?
Sir… I checked… they took all of it.
Let me know what you think in the comments below? Do you like it or not?
Thanks for reading.
I like it...has a beat to it. :)
Thank you so much. I wrote it to a beat, so that makes sense. lol I hope you are doing well. Thanks for reading.
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The first one I heard with a beat was some old cowboy poems.
I later wrote some about a detective .. great fun!
Nice poem... Go ahead dear