With silence (Poetry)

in #poetry6 years ago

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With silence, I silenced her ......... silence,
I read from silent laughs ......... she became silent.
They were walking back and forth with our silence .......
Solving each layer ...... They themselves are formed from a layer.

As soon as our incomprehensibility ... she goes to recite us,
With silence, we silenced them ......... then silenced.

Now in a few meetings ...... she was astonished,
Thought that they will measure us.
So, in the terhai ....... With the heart of your heart,
In my own unconditional c-life ....... To bring a new call.

She laughed and laughed our life ...... When she went to peep,
With silence, we silenced them ......... then silenced.

Thousands of questions in their mind ...... Many times,
How is this life? ......... and how is this world?
Then every link to that ....... Connected with a sequence,
In every episode then she .... Broke another episode

Whenever she used to understand ... she went on and on,
With silence, we silenced them ......... then silenced.

Understanding understood them ... a new wonderful world,
Which used to live a closed bud ......... some new ideas.
But the way in which those ideas are ....... Getting a speed,
Do those thoughts of that kind ....... Will progress forward?

Understanding the truth ... When she goes to share something with us,
With silence, we silenced them ......... then silenced.

We had to recite yesterday ... a glance of her judgment,
We had to take him yesterday ......... one name for her
Tomorrow will be our next .... The fate of a decision,
Tomorrow will be seen ... We also have a picture.

But in the bringing that tomorrow ... it keeps pushing the pen,
With silence, we silenced them ......... then silenced.

Do not take it now from us ... reconsider your articles,
Do not give them any ideas on their fantasies,
Went understood us ....... So forget our book,
We have examined us ....... So do not give any answer.

Now reading this poem ... she keeps on managing himself,
With silence, we silenced them ......... then silenced.


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I love the repetition and your use of refrain. Each time you use the refrain "With silence, we silenced them ......... then silenced" the lines gather more momentum and gravity, lending power to diction and sentence structure of the rest of the piece. In a way, it reminds me of T.S. Eliot's "The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock." Regardless, I enjoyed the piece and look forward to the next one.

Thank u so much , friend

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